I really enjoyed how one simple image carries the whole poem. The edge of the seat becomes more than a place—it becomes a way of living through uncertainty, hope, and expectation. The closing heartbeat brings the cycle quietly back to life. Beautifully written.
I really enjoyed how one simple image carries the whole poem. The edge of the seat becomes more than a place—it becomes a way of living through uncertainty, hope, and expectation. The closing heartbeat brings the cycle quietly back to life. Beautifully written.
Thank you for your kind words and reflection, Antonio! You beautifully highlighted what I hoped both would do. Have a great day! 🙌