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Dean's avatar

“In the sadness of a night without regret”! If I may, I wrote a short poem in my youth with this line, “Like the black of a night hardly fed by the moon.” Hadn’t thought of that line for many many years. Funny. But not funny “ha ha” 🙏

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Carlo Mahfouz's avatar

Love the imagery Dean. Thank you for sharing and glad it sparked this memory to resurface ☺️🙏🏼

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Barrie's avatar

Profound poetry

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Carlo Mahfouz's avatar

Thank you for appreciating its depth Barrie 🙏🏼☺️

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Allegra's avatar

This flows like a melody! Beautiful poem! Skips to a beat of its own! “Tapping feet in a tantrum of silence” loved this line.

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Carlo Mahfouz's avatar

Loved that you caught onto the beat ☺️🙏🏼 That line somehow illustrates how that state felt in so many layers which are hard to explain!

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Gean van Erp's avatar

I did not read it and I did not hear it 🌀🙏

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Carlo Mahfouz's avatar

☺️👌🏻🙏🏼

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